Stormclouds and secrets

 

A mini-story for you today, at the instigation of Cigs . Go read his stories too - they're much better than mine.

We mostly talked about the weather. All other subjects seemed off-limits, somehow. Strange, when we’d been so intimate. I guess that’s what a broken heart does to you. So much to say but no way of saying it.

So we sat and discussed the grey stormclouds gathering above us, like perfect strangers. I zoned out after a few minutes, watching his mouth move; that mouth that had once whispered sweet nothings to me. And suddenly I realised that he wasn’t talking about the weather at all.

7.3.07 11:08
 


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Cigs / Website (7.3.07 11:29)
Plug greatfully received!

Lovely story.


Katja / Website (7.3.07 11:32)
Thanks :-)


amillionpieces / Website (7.3.07 12:05)
The weather covers a multitude of real conversations with a veneer of banality that disguises there real meaning. Well written Katja! x


Huw / Website (7.3.07 13:23)
I like this!


Katja / Website (7.3.07 13:26)
Thanks chaps x


badger (7.3.07 13:32)
Was he talking about shoes?


Katja / Website (7.3.07 13:34)
...and ships, and sealing wax; of cabbages and kings.


cat minder (7.3.07 13:52)
really nice.
but i have to call your bluff.
Was this reality and you just wanted to write about it under the vale of a short story?


Katja / Website (7.3.07 14:05)
Nope, not real at all. Cigs gave me the first sentence and I went from there.


cat minder (7.3.07 14:15)
well then you get a second, well done

x


Daxy / Website (7.3.07 16:02)
I can't understand why people whisper 'sweet nothings' . . . can't they whisper something at least?
And if they are whipsering nothing, how are we supposed to know how sweet it is?


Katja / Website (7.3.07 16:05)
Good question, Dax. Bollocks - you've just arsed up my story :P


Mikeachim / Website (7.3.07 19:22)
Very poignant.....


badger (8.3.07 13:31)
The Liverpool Barcelona match? No wonder you weren't listening.


Arty / Website (8.3.07 14:25)
Oh wow. You happen to have got me on a rather down day, but it's a powefrul little piece though...
*sigh*

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